Tuesday, July 12, 2011

home town speech

A large majority of my family's roots can be traced down to Trenton, Florida (a little town outside Gainesville). this is where almost half of my relatives live. This is also where every day communication can be mistaken for a dog trying to talk with marbles in his mouth. I don't know if it can even be considered a form of the English language. If it is considered,  It is just as much English as a cat meowing. It's almost as unorthodox as the people who live in the town of Trenton.

1 comment:

  1. In the last sentence the first word should read "It's" not "Its". Hometown is one word not two... After you wrote, and I quote, "If it is considered, It is just as much..." Not only is that a sentence fragment, you capitalized the word 'it' after a comma not a period. Good work though!

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